The Adventures of captain Integer

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Once upon a time there was a town that is been cursed by the powerful wizard named addition he is the powerful wizard who wants to destroy captain integers. But before captain Integer was a super hero he was a regular boy who dreamed of being a mathimatician, not just a mathimatician but a super mathimatician. So he went some challenges of his life to be a super mathimatician. I'm going to tell you his story.




When Integer was just a small boy his family was poor and nothing to eat. Integer is walking by down the street while he was walking by he saw a very wonderful school with wonderful students while he was walking there was a wizard(addition is the wizard)watchin his every move so the wizard sent a mathimatician named Cresa, Cresa is a very beutiful girl and smart the wizard sent that girl because the wizard wants to know if Integer was really smart so the girl chalenge him into a math question the question is (-5)+(+5) if you answer this correctly you will be the smartest person in town, said Cresa.so he answerd the question:


so integer answered the question correctly. so Cesa just disappeared. HE knew that he was the smartest person in town he jumped and danced all the way to his home. when he was at home he told his parents how he became the smartest person in town he told hi parents all he did.
the next morning ............he woked up in the morning crying he don't know why so he asked himself if IS SOMETHING TO DO WITH ME OR IST JUST TEARS OF JOY........................
TO BE CONTINUED............LET'S SEE IF THESE MYSTERY IS OVER.

5 Responses to "The Adventures of captain Integer"

November 10, 2008 at 7:04 PM
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November 10, 2008 at 7:06 PM
Good Job! But you should have 4 adding questions and 4 answers. Then after that you should have 2 subtracting integers questions and 2 answers.
angela8-73 said :
November 11, 2008 at 12:52 PM
Yeah Shaneille is right. Plus you don't have an integer subtraction question and two mixed operations question. You also have a spelling mistake, and some thoughts aren't quite finish. Anyways, Good Job!
Andrew-73 said :
November 11, 2008 at 6:28 PM
HI,
Good Job! but I think it would be better if you put the picture in the middle. And I notice that you have some capitalization mistakes. And ya I agree with Shaneille and Angela that you dont have a 4 adding questions and answers. and the subtraction questions but anyways God Job!
Andrew-73 said :
November 11, 2008 at 6:40 PM
One more thing i think you have used too many periods when your not suppose to but ya anyways Good Job!
Have a nice day!

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